What do you think of the freestyle I wrote for “rapper” on this forum?

Question by Lazy L: What do you think of the freestyle I wrote for “rapper” on this forum?
Whats up, I was poking around here and I saw that many people post their lyrics, and IMO I didn’t see one good one. generic, simple, good poetry to write to your mother, but not rap. SO.. I wrote a little freestyle about MOST of the people putting lyrics on yahoo. But Why? Well, I see people write about storys in the streets, about poverty, but I doubt any of them lived what they write about. SO…. here we go(may get offensive)

Quit writing bout ****, ya’ll ain’t seen, the ghetto, sellin’ snow, what it’s like to live low, shut up, it’s me whose the pro,
i’ve seen it all growin up in queens, **** you only see in movie scenes, are reality to me,
no i’ve haven’t been to many places, but delt wit many races, leaded up many faces, the cemetery, is where I say my graces,
Shit like this makes normal people crazy, but shit like this makes me, me, so fools(refering to people who post shit lyrics on yahoo) don’t try to disrespect me,
I’m Lazy, rememba my name, i’ll be hot like a flame, we not one in da same,
I kill you suckas wit my microphone, I’m in da zone, i’ve shown, my lyrical ability, your verses are sugar, and I’m ecstasy, larger intensity,
my verses are fanastic, instant street classics, for you to beat me, you gonna need something drastic,
if you want beef, you pickin da wrong head, mess with me, I’ll light your head up wit lead, put you in your death bed,
next time when you talk about tuff ****, quit, cuz ***** i’ll spit,
into the mic, **** you up like the third reich,
so yeah, I ain’t gone waste my time, guess how much i’ll drop on yo next album, not a dime

Best answer:

Answer by Junior
I never posted anything about me living in the streets?

And you got the wackest flow ever
Your ryhmes so simple
You just wack .
everybody who posted lyrics are better than you
So stfu but ryan he aint good too.

My freestyle-

You talking about di*ks that’s your main source,
Cuz you and ya boy got divorced,
So you putting all your anger here of course.

Those lines were like your freestyle you suck.and those lines was about you.=) Also my flow is not even close to what I wrote its 100x better than you sh*t

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