I wrote this for Hermione/Fred wedding scene, for my fanfictiction. Is it okay?

Question by Daughter of Athena x: I wrote this for Hermione/Fred wedding scene, for my fanfictiction. Is it okay?
I’m writing a fanfiction. It’s about Hermione and Fred. They already have a baby girl and the fanfictiction is called ‘Our family’ hense the last line.
Isit okay?
Btw they are both still in school and Ron really hates them both behing together.

I used to think life was like a movie,
That one day I’d grow up and meet the perfect guy,
We’d live in a house in the city,
With our two kids and dog.

I thought I’d found Mr Right,
Then you went and left me for her.
I couldn’t take it, seeing you with another girl,
I broke down in your brothers arms.
And finally realised.
Maybe you weren’t the right guy.

Thought you’d have a job in the ministry,
And I’d be the devoted mom.
Our kid’s would be straight a students,
Boy, did I have it wrong.

I thought I’d found Mr right,
Then you went and left me for her.
I couldn’t take it, seeing you with another girl,
I broke down in your brothers arms.
And finally realised.
Maybe you weren’t the right guy.

It’s now two years later,
I just walked down the aisle,
Holding your brothers hand.
Your scowling from your seat,
But you had your chance.

I thought I’d found Mr Right,
Then you went and left me for her.
I couldn’t take it, seeing you with another girl,
Broke down in your brothers arms.
And finally realised.
Maybe you weren’t the right guy.

We’re swaying back and forth,
To this song as we dance.
Our baby girl’s with her grandma,
Sleeping in the pram.
I thought I’d found Mr Right,
Then you went and left me for her.
I couldn’t take it, seeing you with another girl,
I broke down in your brothers arms.
And finally realised.
Maybe you weren’t the right guy.

Maybe it’s not what I imagined,
But I wouldn’t change it for the world.
We’re a little rough around the edges.
But, that’s what makes it,
Our family.

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Answer by miss
Its creepy

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