help me revise my essay for english assignment help please…..?

Question by manifantastic: help me revise my essay for english assignment help please…..?
Experenice at Pioneer High

I never realized how Pioneer High School could change my whole life until I have heard people talking about their High School experiences. They have referred to High School as being “the best experience of your life.” During my Freshman year I use to try and imagine what my first semester was going to be like at Pioneer High School, based on what people have told me in the past. During my first semester at Pioneer High School I realized that I couldn’t fully understand what High School was like until I experienced it for myself. My first couple of weeks at Pioneer High School was rough and really stressful. I faced challenges and obstacles that I had never heard about in High School experience.

Pioneer High School is a huge High School and most of the time I couldn’t find my classes.I would always be running back and forth to look at the map. I can still remember that day, it was 10 am on a Friday morning and I was on my way to my English class. As soon as i got to the class I sat down and waited for my Teacher to come. Then I started to get strange looks, like I was an alien from another planet or an outcast. Eventually, a girl came up to me and ask ” Is this your first day ?”. I was little nervous, but confused, and said ” NO”. Then a little while later the Teacher came and did role call. when he finished I raised my hand and told him that he hadn’t called my name. He looked over the list again and then finally asked, “Are you sure you are in the right class Mr?” I got Very embarrassed I said “Isn’t this English?” Everyone started laughing and I feeling humiliated and ashamed I was about to ran out of the room. This is one of my most memorable moments ,and yet I’m still never embarrassed of telling it over and over again. Nevertheless, as time passed, things began improving.

After a few weeks I started feeling more comfortable, I even started to make new friends. During my freshman year at Pioneer High School I felt more responsible, academically and socially. I grew more responsible academically because my classes where very straight to the point, and the teachers spoke with great knowledge. My experience was not like those that you see in movies, where they have nothing but time on their hands. I had to study for my tests and do my homework in very short periods of time. It took a lot of responsibility for me to accomplish this. I felt I had to change many things in my life. I had to get more sleep, finish homework fast, and make time to study for tests. Everybody in my class felt the same pressure.

In addition, to working hard for a high score on assignments, teachers can also make a student stress out ,even when the work is simple. For example, i had a math teacher whose teachings was very different, everything he did was every lengthy,and his problem solving took more time than what it should have taken. There were also some teachers that had a very strong or thick accent. Teachers would constantly remind the students when an assignments was due and how to do it. Which lead me to forget to turn in an assignment or I didn’t properly read my syllabus and or my Teacher never mentioned it. Eventually I concentrated more on what the teacher was saying and took proper action. For the most part I was doing good. Getting good grades I just had to keep up with the due dates.

I also grew more responsible socially as I met more friends and became more familiar with another. We exchanged phone numbers and on our breaks we use to get together and hang out. Our hang out place was the caffetria, locker room, and library. We would play soccer, basketball, tell jokes, talk or just sit there doing nothing grateful not to be hearing a teachers voice. However, I did make a lot of friends and we had a lot of fun together. There was always something to do and we had a lots of fun. Friends, organizations and sports are things that make Pioneer High School a home for me.

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Answer by Jennifer
um wow to much writting =,=

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