Would you go and see this movie?? (opinion on storyline)?

Question by Young Jizza: Would you go and see this movie?? (opinion on storyline)?
my friends and i are making a gang/mob movie… were 16. umm this is what we have right now, tell me what you think and please be honest.

a man comes to visit his mom and dad and brother over the holidays. he gets to their house to see that his mom is lying on the floor dead and his dad and broher have been kidnapped. a gang member is also on the floor dead for the dad shot him and thats why he and the son were kidnapped that way no one else got hurt. he gets together with his best friend. his best friend lives by himself and is a drug adict. his friend suffers from depression because his family left him when he was younger and feels alone because he has no one. he decideds to help his best friend since he is the only person that he calls family.
they both decide to go kill whoever killed his mom. they fail and realize they need more power to succeed. so they start a mob group or whatever and sell drugs, cheat people out or anything they can to get money and weapons to take down this gang that is ruining the city.
they break the law all so they can take this gang down and end hopefulyl end most violence in the city. about half way through the movie they get an email from the gang member with a video link showing the kids dad and brother hostage inside the gangs safehouse. the gang threatens to kill them if he doesnt turn his mob in and stop what theyre doing. he must now make a decision to safe his family, or the city from total chaos.

what do you think??? please share your ideas too, be honest. seriously please do cuz i really wanna know what yall think
‘thanks

theres going to be around 20 of us and possibly more.
oh im 16 and so is about everyone else
24 minutes ago – 4 days left to answer.
ok so hes not really going tgo create a mob, ittl be him and his friend and a couple other will decide to help on the way. umm he doesnt become an adict with his friend. yea theres lots of holes in the plot but alot will be explained in the movie and ill redo some of it before i start. there will be character development. i wont do an email but maybe a phone call or somethin idk. umm the kidnapping of the dad will be because of this:
his dad was an ex airforce officer who worked for secret intelligance. the gang wants him to do something (havent decided yet) blow up the towns capitol whatever idk yet. so they kidnap him and his son. if he doesnt follow orders they kill the son. etc. you get it.
there is a gang leader. its not just one group deciding what to do, i have a ring leader planned out…other than thanks sooo much for the imput

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Answer by broncosfan286
sounds good tell me when it comes out lol

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