Rhh:Rate/Hate Verse…?

Question by TheMicMessiah: Rhh:Rate/Hate Verse…?
Me and my homie Jesus are going to his homies studio,and he had a rhyme he wanted to record there bur wanted me to feature.Before showing it to him,just wanted to see what y’all thought.

You don’t see what we see on the streets as a G,you just the bystandin so you couldn’t understand it so you gotta hand it when you planned it try to scrap and got slammed bitch flip the script rewind to the first hit of that snowwhite trick,made me throw up it made me so sick,divided up whole brain cells so I decided it’s better to plain sell 
took sick pockets and made em well couldn’t even see the hell I had created for myself because I was blinded by that wealth when the police creep I had to use stealth,moms steady cryin while I kept lyin punkin foos thinkin they a lion,predicting the future like a mian,while I try and keep the clucks buyin,tyin myself up,as I go along,couldn’t even tell right from wrong,right from left,crept with meth to the doorstep,kept my mind on my money but a heart with no future,started rollin with straight shooters,but like kareem I was hooked,as 5-0 came I booked,shooked,scared to death,runnin full speed till I was outta breath,till I felt close to death,got away clean like a shower,but still scary so I coward,with my green leaves,no such thing as mean peace,cuff to a crease,a fiend tweak,beast to the east,yeast to some lips,thinkin I’m a locc so I’m poppin in clipz,listenin to clipse,as the rain drips,hits my lips and washes away pain,still actin a foo slangin that Kane,everybody knew I was stayin insane in the brain,try to correct me but I was never an answer to your fuckin problem,fuck with me and I’ll topple em,9/11 solvin huh,try and keep me bottled up,but I’m steady sprayin yo steady prayin ass,you shoulda known not to run with the cats skippin class,with my white knuckle brass,let’s see who gets to chuckle last.

Best answer:

Answer by XXxxMwWmxxXX
4/5 it reminds of Tupac’s style with how it flows, pretty dope, just widen your vocab a little

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