rate my rap this is my first completed song?

Question by Matt: rate my rap this is my first completed song?
I’ve been writing for a couple months but this is my only finished song.

“Yeah I took the lead and changed the game, I took heat, but somehow I put out the flame,
now it’s Nique, lyrically never gonna change,
I flipped the script on these bitches and then rewrote the page,
cause it’s a sprint to the finish in this arms race,
if you aint first than your last, no room for second place
and fuck around here, you’ll disappear without a trace,
so just remember that, next time you see my face

cause I come from under the rock, where the sun dont shine and people still bump pac,
penitientary flow, so you know I got it on lock,
showed em the way to go but still came back to the block,
where dead presidents reign, and the heat never stops,
and ballers and hustlers still dodging them cops,
and we all motherf*ckers just like yo pops

but thats just the way it is, and thats just the way it goes,
same shit, different day, and this never gets old,
veins froze, cause everybodys blood runs cold
its do or die in this world what you reap you sow,
so, memo, to those that oppose talk shit and get a couple holes put in your clothes,
and this is for those, that know how to flow,
but sold out, cause they only f*ckin’ rhyme for the dough

Yeah cause skills arent measured in mass appeal, but still, I keep it real tellin’ you how I feel,
gotta live your life cause dreams just dont pay the bills,
spittin 10,000 bars that hit you hard like steel,
cause im still at it, like an addict,
no turning back,
dont let your hopes go up in smoke and start doing crack, cause real life means more than what i said on this track,

the songs called 10,000 Bars

Best answer:

Answer by 50 CENT
thats FAR from 10,00 bars

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