Comments on a movie Im working on!?

Question by Horrorkid: Comments on a movie Im working on!?
Hey so I write movie stories, Make them into scripts, and then film them with my friends and family. So yeah I have like 3 scripts written and so yeah I kind of wanna tell you one of my ideas. Please don’t steal them. I worked hard on them!

So yeah I’m only going to share one of my ideas. Kinda long sorry!

So it starts out in a 2nd grade classroom, in a big tall building. There is a new kid called Sam. He’s from Jupiter, Florida. He is really quiet and the kids in his class think he is weird, especially Timmy and Ralph, the 2 kids at his table. Sam is sitting, watching Timmy crash his toy cars together, when all of a sudden he starts freaking out!!! He has a flash back of his dead father and the last time he saw him before he gets into a fatal crash. The teacher runs to Sam asking if he was ok, and Sam just nods, but gives Timmy a blank but creepy stare. When its time for recesses, Sam doesn’t want to go out. The teacher allows him to stay inside till its time to come back. Everyone exits the room except Timmy. Timmy thinks it would be funny to scare Sam. He waits till Sam is by the window and he pretends he is a ghost. He pops out and scares Sam right through the window and Sam falls to his death. When everyone sees what happened, Timmy says that Sam tried to hurt him, so he had to defend himself by pushing him away.(people believed him due to the way he was acting in the morning) Fast-forward 23 years. Timmy is 30. He begins to see Sam’s ghost and it isn’t happy.

I WONT TELL YOU MORE! sooooooooo how is it? Thanks, oh and try not to be too harsh! Lol Thanks!
I’m only 15 btw, and wanna be a producer/director for movies when I grow up.

Best answer:

Answer by Alex
good luck ya

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